My writing practice of TOEFL.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful

I absolutely agree with money can influence with people's life. So i thinks that money is one of the most important needs of my life. It can change person's life completely. But for reaching to a success it is not enough. If people who are rich can be successful, there will be no bankruptcy. Unfortunately there still has it. I think that there are a few techniques to be successful. The most important thing is being hard working and then of course intelligence. About rich people who are weak don't have ability all above.

Furthermore, I believe that workaholic people can reach their dreams. I remember that a lot of famous people slept a few hours in a day when they were a student or not distinguished. From their story they were unbelievable workers. They never had free time and they were always thought that must do what is in their head. Finally they can find high career and lots of money. It is a story about hundreds of people who born in poor family.

Moreover, great affect of children is weather of family. Warm and educated family people are almost the same as their parents.

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• money is one of the most important needs
• money can change person's life
  
• i disagree with this statement
• practice and hard work is the most important requirement of success
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